Made a Music Video, tell me what you think.

[[UFP]Ghost]

This is my second video made, i used premier pro 3, dubbed the song over me and my friends. Watch and comment, constructive criticism would be the best, as I have much to learn about making videos. Post your comments on youtube as my computer is in the shop and forums are banned on the school computers but youtube isn't.

Have a look and comment :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TxAuvdpcBMs

[bonz]

Failure!
You should have used a Keytar (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Keytar) instead of holding a keyboard.

;););)

[yauhui]

commented on the youtube page.

[[UFP]Ghost]

thanks, it's nice to know what people think, i uploaded a version with the black bars fixed, i didn't preview it first and the crop feature must be bugged in premier.

I'm gonna keep that version up though as it's the link I gave my friends.

[yauhui]

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