I'm probably going to be destroyed for this, but...

[robowurmz]

...I've started a forum comic.

Yes.

Gasp away.

Jump out the windows...

But here it is, Number 1!

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s258/Robowurmz/Forum1.png

[Liketyspli]

Well, you know, the start is actually funny. not sure about the eyes in the first panel... :confused: Why aint the lines smooth?

[Melon]

10 recent threads with comics in and counting.

We've hit double figures!

-EDIT- That includes Basti@ns comic zone and big juicy melon, if anybody was wondering.

[>DoomWorm<]

Omg, this is one of the biggest crazes ever. Now people can get updated on a (good) comic ten times more!

[MrBunsy]

Was this all spun from Zero starting up his comic again? Funny really, since even I had considered starting mine up (not really properly, but you know how it is) and then it kinda went crazy. Let's see how many survive the first week.

Nice start though, made me chuckle.

[SuperBlob]

Was this all spun from Zero starting up his comic again? Funny really, since even I had considered starting mine up (not really properly, but you know how it is) and then it kinda went crazy. Let's see how many survive the first week.

Nice start though, made me chuckle.

Go on Bunsy, join us in the ultimate bandwagon hoppage!

[MrBunsy]

Go on Bunsy, join us in the ultimate bandwagon hoppage!

I think I'll hang back, an opportunity for some satire may well arise soon. I'll put some ideas on the burner though.

I think this is the most frequently I've ever posted in the fan art forum since Preaser's Caption Competetion. :p

[Pigbuster]

Let's see how many survive the first week.

Yes. Let's.

*cocks shotgun*

:p

[Thnikk]

Geez.
We should publish our own newspaper with a 13-comic page.
And horoscopes.
(how do you make a hormone? Don't pay her. Hahahahahahahahaha*smacked wit a fish*).

[Cisken1]

YAY! Eat me!

[Zero72]

Zero Armorfling says:
What is it with me and runaway ideas, anyway? lol
Zero Armorfling says:
I'm like
Zero Armorfling says:
hmm forum fighters
Zero Armorfling says:
(4 aborted attempts at such a game)
Zero Armorfling says:
hmmm Mock Avatar Day
Zero Armorfling says:
(4 week-long Mock Avatar "day"s)
Munkee says:
lol
Zero Armorfling says:
Hmmm forum comic
Munkee says:
*NUKE*
Zero Armorfling says:
(39,000 forum comics)

Looks nifty.

[robowurmz]

Thanks for the input, and about the eyes...Well....I forgot about the oval tool.

[tgworm]

Thanks for the input, and about the eyes...Well....I forgot about the oval tool.

The only problem with it is that it has to be 100% upright.

[AndrewTaylor]

I forgot about the oval tool.

Good idea.

The oval tool is an Abomination.

[Paul.Power]

Good idea.

The oval tool is an Abomination.It's handy for framework sketching, but I wouldn't use it in a finished piece, no.

[robowurmz]

I thought you meant the INSIDES of the eyes! Oh no, there was a problem with my mouse in the first frame. It went all jaggedy.

[robowurmz]

New! Part 2!
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s258/Robowurmz/Forum2.png

Parts:

Main Characters
[Me]
[2]
[3]
[4]

Baddies
[1]
[2]
[3]
[4]

Cameos?
You'll just have to find out.

The Quest for the Missing Byte!

Please give your character profile, and the backround for the bubble, and the colour of text for the bubble.

[SuperBlob]

Cake? Eaten? Oh come on, you KNOW who the evil guy just HAS to be *wink wink*
(Same as Robowurmz, red and white)

[Paul.Power]

Oh well, at least it made me laugh.

And thanks for the slightly random inclusion.

[>DoomWorm<]

Main BADDIE Count In! (look at my comic thread, it says all about appearance, background of bubble, and text. But i'm gonna say it anyways.)

Background: Dark red
Text: white

Personality: kind of crazy.
Abilities: Can suck powers out of people, and "inherit" their powers. Also makes his basic powers of SLIGHTLY morphing, and SLIGHTLY hovering into GOOD shapecanging power, (and making things go through him, like a ghost) and GOOD flying. (OH YEAH) Also can make a white bright ball that he shoots with, smaller makes faster shooting but weak power, Bigger makes slower shooting but GREAT power. Can sometimes appear of nowhere if enough power. (OH GOD THE ABILITIES)

[tgworm]

I would make a perfect main character's right hand man.

Bubble Colour:Green
Text Colour:Green

Profile: (Near the bottom)http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=19879&page=40

[Alien King]

The text can be a bit hard to read at times.

http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=359467&postcount=170 - Obvious bad guy.

Text colour - Green
Bubble Colour - White

[wigwam the]

I'll be a good guy.
I look like this (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=549666&postcount=1108) except with white eyes and pupils and no sword.

bubble: white
text: dark grey

hiiii

[Liketyspli]

Can my Sigorm (Muscular Beaver).
Appear now and then to give you some stupid advise?
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=548907&postcount=1099

Bubble Colour: Pink.
Text Colour: Black.

[_Kilburn]

If you add me (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=542866&postcount=1088), I can build an automated-missing-byte-finder :p No I don't invent only weapons. ;)

Bubble colour : Yellow
Text colour : Dark red

[robowurmz]

Okay, so that's

Goodies:
[Me]
[Tgworm]
[Wigwam]
[_Kilburn]

Baddies
[Doomworm]
[Superblob]
[AK]
[4]

Cameo's
[Liketyspli]

[Kelster23]

I want to be on the baddies team! :)

[Cisken1]

DOH! too late...

oh well *galoursh*

[>DoomWorm<]

Oh yeah! I got a part. SUCCESS!

[Plasma]

I want to be on the baddies team! :)
Then I also... damnit! Too late!

[>DoomWorm<]

Then I also... damnit! Too late!

Oh hells yeah. Us stealers;)

Oh page 2

[robowurmz]

Ok, then, so the last baddie is Kelster.
What colour should your bubble and text be?
Cisken and Plasma...
I might be able to fit you in somewhere.
Could you give me your profile Cisken? I know what Plasma and Kelster look like.
Oh, and No 3.
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s258/Robowurmz/Forum3.png

[Gardy Looo]

Some comments on quality improving:
Make the horizon line straight, unless its a SLOPE OF STEEPNESS.
Fill in those white spaces, like in panel 3.
The FATHOOM in the second panel looks off. Here's a handy tip, fill in the background you want before inserting text, if you put text then fill in colour, it will look like what is happening now.



Other than that, it's good. :p

[WormOfFire]

Lol...a cake.

Um...i wanna be a cameo :p

[robowurmz]

Ok, you can be Cameo'd, but I need your profile.

[tgworm]

me too! Profile- se av.

[>DoomWorm<]

Also, if i am Baddie nr. [1] does that mean i'm main baddie?:) CONTROLLING A TEAM??:D

If so, ohhhhh yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeahhhh. it's awwwriggght.

[Kelster23]

Bubble: Light blue
Text: Darker blue
Simple as that.
Thanks!

[Plasma]

Oh, and while you're here...
FINISH THAT WEAPON LIST FOR WORMS: EVOLVED!

And good comic.

[Melon]

Seconded. We're waiting for you.

Your art is nice. I'm not a big fan of those yellow pupils, I feel they could be a bit smoother, but I know it's hard to draw circles freehand. I do like the expression in the third panel of the second comic.

[Paul.Power]

Hey, someone's bitten my cake! I must set out on a quest for the missing byte! Request!

It is difficult to say how many things are wrong with that plot premise, but I shall try, for the good of the city.


It is difficult to go on a quest for something that no longer exists.
That pun is rubbish, and not in a good way. It is a completely pointless computing reference that ties in with nothing else about the story.
You're a bit mean-spirited if you're going to hunt down someone who took a single bite out of your cake. The whole cake, perhaps. But what if some poor homeless worm on the edge of starvation took that bite? Eh?
On the other hand, it can't be SuperBlob because we all know he wouldn't stop at one bite.


I also object slightly to the misrepresentation of my previous comment.

Your art is pretty good overall, but that is such a weak plot premise that even I balk at it.

[robowurmz]

Well, if you hadn't noticed, the "Byte" thing is because Robowurmz just so happens to be a robot, and doesn't have that word in his vocabulary, so is presenting the nearest possible alternative, which in turn is a pun. And plus, computers are not known for logic, so trying to find something which doesn't exist isn't unlike most computers. And he doesn't want to harm or kill the person who took the bite, he just wants it back. Which is, of course another way in which he is like a computer. He is not being as logical as he can be.

And melon...
5 Zooks,
5 Nades,
2 Dynamites
3 Ropes
1 Teleport
And my team weapon is 1 HHG.

I'm keeping the rest of my points until later.

[tgworm]

Well, if you hadn't noticed, the "Byte" thing is because Robowurmz just so happens to be a robot, and doesn't have that word in his vocabulary, so is presenting the nearest possible alternative, which in turn is a pun. And plus, computers are not known for logic, so trying to find something which doesn't exist isn't unlike most computers. And he doesn't want to harm or kill the person who took the bite, he just wants it back. Which is, of course another way in which he is like a computer. He is not being as logical as he can be.

It's a good comic so far but I can't see as much potential in this won unlike most of the others. This is mainly because the leading role is going on a search, or escapade if you will, for a "byte" of cake. Bearing in mind, As PP said, that the piece of cake would most likely, already have been eaten, it is a bit of a dead-end job. Although I look forward to being proven wrong.

[SuperBlob]

4. On the other hand, it can't be SuperBlob because we all know he wouldn't stop at one bite.

Perhaps I dropped it, and got dragged off, crying like a baby about how I dropped the cake. :p

[Plasma]

I'm keeping the rest of my points until later.
That's great, but we need you to use the points NOW!

[Melon]

I'm keeping the rest of my points until later.

I don't want to hi-jack your art thread with my little forum game, but according to the rules:

1. Your weapons list is meant to be secret, so please send it by PM next time, now Plasma knows you have a HHG, and may be able to plan accordingly.
2. You have to spend all your points at the beginning. You cannot buy weapons once the game has started. The reason for this is that you need to try and plan ahead for any sort of terrain. For example, it may be really hilly, in which case ninja ropes and parachutes are essential, or it may be totally flat, rending them useless. If I let you buy them once it's started, then that element is gone.

Back on topic now, I had no idea your sigworm was a robot, I think you should make him look slightly more, roboty.

[>DoomWorm<]

Just make the daymn comic :(

[Cisken1]

Then I also... damnit! Too late!

BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAH!!!!


...oh wait...DAMMIT!

AH erm

PROFILE (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=299248&postcount=30)

NOTE, just draw my glasses round, it looks much better on a worm.

[Kelster23]

So when's the next one come out?

[>DoomWorm<]

Never ever i suppose

[tgworm]

Never ever i suppose

This thread should only have been revived by Robo.:rolleyes:

So many comics were created and now one by one they are slowly dying.:p

DO NOT POST NEXT UNLESS YOU ARE ROBOWURMZ

[robowurmz]

You thought this thread DIED! But no no! I was working on a group pic and never finished it, so while you wait...A FILLER. And a seperate explanation of why I haven't posted art for so long.
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s258/Robowurmz/Somewouldsay.jpg

[Melon]

No no no, you're doing it all wrong. (http://www.kieranmillar.com/art/filler3.png) (replace Metal Alex with robowurmz)

P.S. Is that worm your old style or your new style? If it's your new style he could still do with some work. Place a crease where his "neck" touches his "tail". Also his mouth could do with being a bit wider, especially bringing the bottom lip forward a lot. It won't make him look so fat either.

[Metal Alex]

(replace Metal Alex with robowurmz)

I feel bad now... :(

[robowurmz]

It's your new style, and he could still do with some work. Place a crease where his "neck" touches his "tail". Also his mouth could do with being a bit wider, especially bringing the bottom lip forward a lot. It won't make him look so fat either.

Ok, thanks for teh hinties.