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twist_worm
20 Sep 2006, 17:02
yes i am taking anouther shot! i am reading a book called vampirates so i had an idea what if we had a worm side and a vampire-worm side in a comic... i don't have anything right now i can't get on the computor at my house (lunch time @ school) but i will have a few comics before i get off i'll be on tomarrow so put as many comics as you can on tonite:D :D :D :D :D

robowurmz
20 Sep 2006, 17:03
Righty-dokey, then. It's nice to see someone who has initative! Keep thinking positive and you'll go FAR!

agent luke
20 Sep 2006, 17:24
Welcome back twist worm! Just keep trying art and soon....Well mabey not, Your art will be good! Just look at me, I use to draw green blobs with a face, now:


http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=29064


Request if you like,

Liketyspli
20 Sep 2006, 18:23
Just look at me
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahaha.............
Okey. i think its better if you look at Slick or Splapp's art. (or maybe Maveristef's). And i think Pigbusters art is really good too.

Cyclaws
20 Sep 2006, 18:58
Bwahahahahahahahahahahahaha.............
Okey. i think its better if you look at Slick or Splapp's art. (or maybe Maveristef's). And i think Pigbusters art is really good too.
Perhaps if you had read the next part, you would have understood that he claims to have improved, not that he claims to be on Splapp's level.

Oft99
20 Sep 2006, 19:00
Atleast he admits the green blobs with a face thing.

Oh and good luck Twist Worm.

Liketyspli
20 Sep 2006, 19:44
Perhaps if you had read the next part, you would have understood that he claims to have improved, not that he claims to be on Splapp's level.

Myes. you got a point there.

wormthingy
20 Sep 2006, 21:40
Welcome back twist worm! Just keep trying art and soon....Well mabey not, Your art will be good! Just look at me, I use to draw green blobs with a face, now:


http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=29064


Request if you like,

and now theyre pink/orange pointy things!

Kelster23
21 Sep 2006, 00:18
I WANT TO BE ON THE VAMPIRE SIDE!!!
You can look at my art, if you want to, it's not the best, but atleast it's decent.
CLICKEY (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=29658&highlight=Kelster%27s+Art%21)

Shockdude
21 Sep 2006, 00:30
mr. game & worm/shockdude (choose a name)
black body, white eyes, eyebrows, mouth
completely neutral
usually found in a game & watch system

agent luke
21 Sep 2006, 01:55
I'll be in! Uh..My sigworm is in my avatar, I choose worm side

robowurmz
21 Sep 2006, 08:48
I'm in! Check my character profile. Worms Side please.
http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=528698&postcount=1032

Xinos
21 Sep 2006, 12:57
Request if you like,

Go back to drawing green blobs with faces on them.

Akuryou13
21 Sep 2006, 13:51
Righty-dokey, then. It's nice to see someone who has initative! Keep thinking positive and you'll go FAR!http://www2.foxsearchlight.com/littlemisssunshine/

:rolleyes:

robowurmz
21 Sep 2006, 17:41
Random.........

Plasma
21 Sep 2006, 18:01
I WANT TO BE ON THE VAMPIRE SIDE!!!
You can look at my art, if you want to, it's not the best, but atleast it's decent.
CLICKEY (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=29658&highlight=Kelster%27s+Art%21)
Zoogles! I request for a side of Vapireness.

SupSuper
21 Sep 2006, 23:00
It's Angel and Darla all over again. :rolleyes:

agent luke
21 Sep 2006, 23:11
You know..It would be nice if this comic thread actually had a comic in it! *Looks at Twist_worm*

Kelster23
22 Sep 2006, 00:06
You know..It would be nice if this comic thread actually had a comic in it! *Looks at Twist_worm*

*Also looks at Twistworm*

Akuryou13
22 Sep 2006, 00:08
Random.........watch the movie, you'll understand.

Pigbuster
22 Sep 2006, 06:19
http://www2.foxsearchlight.com/littlemisssunshine/

:rolleyes:
NEEE.
REFERENCE.
:D

Anyway, this thread should probably remain silent until Twist Worm actually does something.

Vader
22 Sep 2006, 20:03
Yes, but I would like to add that my sigworm would be quite an apt character in this.

Shockdude
23 Sep 2006, 02:06
profile updated

twist_worm
23 Sep 2006, 20:28
ok guys thanks for all the replys the internet at school wa s down but i am on restriction probation so i need to watch out =)






http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/7639/howijoinedt17eh0.png (http://imageshack.us)

twist_worm
23 Sep 2006, 22:49
ok so fasr kelster me and plasma are wormpires (HOORAY i thought up a word)
and roboworms is a normal worm ok well time to start *takes out paper and a pencil and heads to studio/room*

Pigbuster
24 Sep 2006, 00:30
You have earned the "least-comprehensible-comic-ever" trophy.
Use it wisely.

AND I WANT TO BE A VAMPIRE.

twist_worm
24 Sep 2006, 00:34
You have earned the "least-comprehensible-comic-ever" trophy.
Use it wisely.

AND I WANT TO BE A VAMPIRE.

yay a trophy

Akuryou13
24 Sep 2006, 03:36
*tacks a blue ribbon in "worst art" and "worst handwriting" onto the trophy*

Pigbuster
24 Sep 2006, 05:07
I think that I have to attempt a transcript, here.

"I know it's going to happen man."
"Why do I hang out with you?"
"The story went like this."
"Blah blah blah 17 blah."
"OK, I am it."
/WELCOME TWIST_WORM
"Then you joined..."
"Hold that thought"
"NO."
"YOU!" (You used the force)
"OK and my name isn't locksgsrthpppbpbptt___"
"TOO GRUSOM (sic)"
"A little math while you wait."
"Chain & ball snail + salt =..."
"No... no"
"NOOOOO!"
TO BE CONTINUED

Wow. That... didn't help at all.

Gardy Looo
24 Sep 2006, 13:07
If I were to understand that, I'd be retarded.
Seriously, the comic's (very) confusing.

Snoozy
24 Sep 2006, 13:13
Before EVER making a comic, learn how to draw the panels properly...

Akuryou13
24 Sep 2006, 13:23
Before EVER making a comic, learn how to draw the panels properly...completely agreed.

WormOfFire
24 Sep 2006, 20:43
completely agreed.

Aku strikes again!

:eek: :eek: :eek:

The comic is horrible.

Kelster23
24 Sep 2006, 20:45
Next time, can you make that bigger? I can't read it. =(
SB helped a little bit though.Put it on DA.

Liketyspli
24 Sep 2006, 21:51
Myes. I dont think the art is bad. should work on the lines. dont know whats going on on there (till i read PB's post)

Paul.Power
24 Sep 2006, 23:14
"OK, I am it."

It's "OK, I am in", but I appreciate that isn't much help.

Akuryou13
24 Sep 2006, 23:47
dont know whats going on on there (till i read PB's post)wait, you know what's goin on AFTER reading PB's explanation?!

Kelster23
25 Sep 2006, 03:52
wait, you know what's goin on AFTER reading PB's explanation?!

I can't tell either way...:(

Akuryou13
25 Sep 2006, 04:12
I can't tell either way...:(join the club....that was kinda my point :p

WormOfFire
25 Sep 2006, 06:23
Myes. I dont think the art is bad. should work on the lines. dont know whats going on on there (till i read PB's post)

More like that.

Sorry.

SupSuper
25 Sep 2006, 11:01
Frankly, I've seen much worse art. But yes the handwriting is terrible, and the comic makes little to no sense whatsoever.

"YOU!" (You used the force)
"OK and my name isn't locksgsrthpppbpbptt___""YOU!"
*Luke use the force*
"Ok and my name isn't Luke"

"Chain & ball snail + salt =...""Snail + salt = Chain & ball"

Yay I made the comic make 0.01% less sense!

Plasma
26 Sep 2006, 22:08
Frankly, I've seen much worse art. But yes the handwriting is terrible, and the comic makes little to no sense whatsoever.

"YOU!"
*Luke use the force*
"Ok and my name isn't Luke"
Ah, that would make more sense.

"Snail + salt = Chain & ball"

Yay I made the comic make 0.01% less sense!
Looks more like 'dead snail' to me.

I think I can understand all of it now, except for:
1: Why a worm turned into a snail.
2: Why the fire enlarged.
3: Why he's saying NO, because I thought he killed the snail.

Kelster23
27 Sep 2006, 00:15
1: Why a worm turned into a snail.
3: Why he's saying NO, because I thought he killed the snail.
:eek: There's a snail in that comic?! I didn't see it...:p

WormGod
28 Sep 2006, 17:23
I thought it was this:

"I know it's going to happen ian"
"Why do I hang out with you?"
"The story went l;ie thi)"
"blah blah blah Doky 17 blah"
"OK I am !n"
/welcome Twist_Wor
"then you worked..."
"hold that thought"
"NO"
"You!"
Juke USB the crumbs
"OK and my namae l;Xt lm"
TOO GRUSOM
"A l;Hle must while you matt"
"no...no"
"NOOOOO!"
TO BE CONTINUED

SupSuper
28 Sep 2006, 18:34
Congratulations for contributing absolutely nothing to the decoding of the comic.

(watch wormgod express gratitude below)

Terra Worm
28 Sep 2006, 21:09
yay for wormgod

robowurmz
28 Sep 2006, 21:12
Righty-dokey, then. It's nice to see someone who has initative! Keep thinking positive and you'll go FAR!

Ehm...well.......

Cisken1
28 Sep 2006, 22:22
I thought it was this:

"I know it's going to happen ian"
"Why do I hang out with you?"
"The story went l;ie thi)"
"blah blah blah Doky 17 blah"
"OK I am !n"
/welcome Twist_Wor
"then you worked..."
"hold that thought"
"NO"
"You!"
Juke USB the crumbs
"OK and my namae l;Xt lm"
TOO GRUSOM
"A l;Hle must while you matt"
"no...no"
"NOOOOO!"
TO BE CONTINUED

YAY! COMIC!

agent luke
28 Sep 2006, 23:34
ok guys thanks for all the replys the internet at school wa s down but i am on restriction probation so i need to watch out =)






http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/7639/howijoinedt17eh0.png (http://imageshack.us)



:D HAHAHAHAH!!!:D THATS THE FUNNYIST.......Oh,wait..okay thats not funny,:mad:

twist_worm
29 Sep 2006, 16:33
its not supposed to be good just so you know.................... i am grounded again this time for kicking someones door (wich i didn't do) and breaking it (again not me) so i am grounded till hopefully holoween:(

robowurmz
29 Sep 2006, 17:05
Grounded till HALLOWEEN?
Well THAT sucks.
Just for kicking a door? (Which you didn't do)
My parents wouldn't be annoyed or angry with me for kicking a door. In fact they wouldn't really react at all. They would just say to me, "Um....why did you kick that door? Are you okay?" becuase in my (and their) opinon, kicking a door just seems wierd. And freakish.

WormGod
29 Sep 2006, 18:52
Sometimes I WANT to get grounded for three months.

And then I say, "Oh."

Kelster23
29 Sep 2006, 19:46
I haven't been grounded since I was in like... grade 3.:p
I always used to kick my door...shut.

Muzer
29 Sep 2006, 20:15
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, PEOPLE!

The art was brilliant, but the writing is a bit illegible (not as bad as mine, though!). It would be good if you added the writing digitally. Other than that, pretty good.

Liketyspli
29 Sep 2006, 20:54
and fineline it.

philby4000
29 Sep 2006, 21:23
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, PEOPLE!

The art was brilliant,
What comic where you reading?

Kelster23
29 Sep 2006, 22:02
What comic where you reading?

Probably one of Slicks. Definately not this one.
Art in this one: Atleast you can tell what is what! But it will improve... I'm sure... *Wishfully thinking*

philby4000
30 Sep 2006, 02:07
Art in this one: Atleast you can tell what is what! *

What comic were you reading?

Okay, I'll admit it's not the worse comic to ever grace these forums, but it's still pretty bad.

Akuryou13
30 Sep 2006, 02:37
At least you can tell what is what!sorry, you must be in the wrong place.

robowurmz
30 Sep 2006, 08:04
Hmm...who do you think is better?
Drak or Twist?

Vote now!

Akuryou13
30 Sep 2006, 13:21
Hmm...who do you think is better?
Drak or Twist?

Vote now!did you have mushrooms for breakfast or are you intentionally incomprehensible? :p

robowurmz
30 Sep 2006, 13:26
Who is better at art?
ReturnDrak or Twist_worm?

TWIST_WORM IS THE BETTER OF THE TWO BY FARNESS!

Akuryou13
30 Sep 2006, 13:29
Who is better at art?
ReturnDrak or Twist_worm?

TWIST_WORM IS THE BETTER OF THE TWO BY FARNESS!two questions:

1. where is some of drak's art, I don't remember what it looked like.

2. what the bloody schnoz bag does that have to do with this thread?

robowurmz
30 Sep 2006, 13:39
1. Go to fanart and find Drak's thread
2. It was just a gimmick. Uuuh. Because people said it was confusaling. Etc.

Oh I understand the story now:
They talk about stuff.
The fire suddenly explodes and kills his friend. He blames a snail and salts it. The diagram says: Snail + Salt = Burnt Snail.
He cries because his friend is dead. The burnt snail is over at the left.

Akuryou13
30 Sep 2006, 14:15
1. Go to fanart and find Drak's threadthe reason I asked for you to link it was because I didn't want to do that. :p
2. It was just a gimmick. Uuuh. Because people said it was confusaling. Etc.yeah, that still doesn't make it either appropriate or useful to the thread.

Oh I understand the story now:
They talk about stuff.
The fire suddenly explodes and kills his friend. He blames a snail and salts it. The diagram says: Snail + Salt = Burnt Snail.
He cries because his friend is dead. The burnt snail is over at the left.and that makes sense in some way?!

wigwam the
30 Sep 2006, 14:20
it's here: here (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=30326)

Pigbuster
30 Sep 2006, 16:57
its not supposed to be good just so you know....................

That seems like an excuse...

Also, this thread is SPAM, and seeing as how Twist is grounded, we probably won't see more of this comic for a while.

Liketyspli
30 Sep 2006, 18:14
Who is better at art?
ReturnDrak or Twist_worm?

Who is better at art?
robowurmz or Twist_worm?

Kelster23
30 Sep 2006, 18:55
it's here: here (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=30326)

They look like wingless and footless ducks...=.=;.
I vote the Twister.
Who is better at art?
robowurmz or Twist_worm?
Hmmm. I know! Twister!

Slick
30 Sep 2006, 19:07
Hmmm this gives me an idea for a thread. :p

robowurmz
1 Oct 2006, 08:08
Did you see my new new style?
With the cartoony bulgy sort of eyes.etc?

Liketyspli
1 Oct 2006, 09:57
Myes, i dont think you should say the Who's better thing. Cuz you also aint that good.

Paul.Power
8 Oct 2006, 15:09
its not supposed to be good just so you know...

Er, obvious comment but "then why did you make it?"

I mean, even if you can't get the art looking good, at least tell a coherent and readable story with legible writing. And/or make us laugh... and for the right reasons.

twist_worm
12 Oct 2006, 16:52
Er, obvious comment but "then why did you make it?"

I mean, even if you can't get the art looking good, at least tell a coherent and readable story with legible writing. And/or make us laugh... and for the right reasons.

ok I confess I was listening to music when i made it and toned out the drawing part (plus i was stressed):(

Kelster23
13 Oct 2006, 01:53
0.o...
I listen to music when I draw. You just need to learn how to multi-task, that's all.

Akuryou13
13 Oct 2006, 04:06
ok I confess I was listening to music when i made it and toned out the drawing part (plus i was stressed):(I listen to music during every part of my day (including sleep), and it doesn't stop me from being able to make a coherent statement. listening to music is no excuse for a lack of work ethic.....I should know, I know possibly every excuse available to not do work :p

Liketyspli
13 Oct 2006, 10:53
then it was the ''Stressed'' part i guess. :rolleyes:

Slick
13 Oct 2006, 12:26
So what...are you accually doing somthing with this?
I know you did that one comic...but I mean, now. :p

WormGod
14 Oct 2006, 07:36
The question is, what type of music?

Some Mike Oldfield or Steve Hillage can be quite calming, and it would look silly if you were distracted by that.

Liketyspli
14 Oct 2006, 21:30
I vote Speed Metal.... And thats everything but calming. ;) liek u dunno

Paul.Power
14 Oct 2006, 22:41
The question is, what type of music?

Some Mike Oldfield or Steve Hillage can be quite calming, and it would look silly if you were distracted by that.I dunno, Tubular Bells gets pretty lively in places...

Most of the time I don't listen to music, but this is more through general forgetfulness than a dislike of it while I work (Quite the opposite, really - I can't work in true silence, because every sound becomes magnified)

robowurmz
15 Oct 2006, 09:13
It could have been something really distracting...like maybe the 1816 overture, the "loudest, horriblest, crashiest, screechiest piece ever" (as quoted by the Composer himself) .

Akuryou13
15 Oct 2006, 13:43
the 1816 overturetell me that was a typo....

WormGod
15 Oct 2006, 17:29
I dunno, Tubular Bells gets pretty lively in places...

I of course was refering to some of his less famous pieces.

Paul.Power
15 Oct 2006, 20:57
tell me that was a typo....Maybe Tchaikovsky made a sequel? :p

I of course was refering to some of his less famous pieces.Can't say I know any of his less famous pieces.

philby4000
15 Oct 2006, 21:00
0.o...
I listen to music when I draw. You just need to learn how to multi-task, that's all.
listening to music and drawing at the same time DOES NOT COUNT AS MULTITASKING.

Kelster23
17 Oct 2006, 00:42
listening to music and drawing at the same time DOES NOT COUNT AS MULTITASKING.

Yes it does. You don't really realize it, but in your head you're singing along with the words or the tune. If you're writing words in your comic or whatever, it should be, considering your brain is doing two things at once.
Though I find it hard to play music and think about other things at the same time... I always mess up when I do that...:( [/randomness]

Akuryou13
17 Oct 2006, 01:14
Yes it does. You don't really realize it, but in your head you're singing along with the words or the tune. If you're writing words in your comic or whatever, it should be, considering your brain is doing two things at once.yes, but it's such a simplistic set of processes that it's no different than walking and talking at the same time. it's multitasking on such a basic level of multitasking that it doesn't really count.

Pigbuster
17 Oct 2006, 05:50
I cannot listen to music and program a game.
Some other people can.
Therefore, it follows that some people cannot listen to music and draw.

Methinks that it counts.

Akuryou13
17 Oct 2006, 06:46
I cannot listen to music and program a game.
Some other people can.
Therefore, it follows that some people cannot listen to music and draw.

Methinks that it counts.hmm......well apparently your opinion is the wrong one. form a new, better one :p ;)

robowurmz
17 Oct 2006, 08:38
Hmm. Twist, how about some comic now? Just because you're grounded doesn't mean that you can't draw...


Oh no. Don't tell me. Your parents attached you to a ball and chain! Noo! How will you reach the paper and HB or Number 2 pencil?

philby4000
17 Oct 2006, 12:53
Don't encourage him.

Akuryou13
17 Oct 2006, 13:24
Hmm. Twist, how about some comic now? Just because you're grounded doesn't mean that you can't draw...


Oh no. Don't tell me. Your parents attached you to a ball and chain! Noo! How will you reach the paper and HB or Number 2 pencil?come on. he's grounded. let's just enjoy what little time we DO have instead of trying to hurry it along.

Kelster23
18 Oct 2006, 01:07
come on. he's grounded. let's just enjoy what little time we DO have instead of trying to hurry it along.

You saying by him being grounded that he suddenly got a life-threatning disease and the little time is what we have left with his exsistence that we would not even realize if he died from the disease?

Akuryou13
18 Oct 2006, 04:27
You saying by him being grounded that he suddenly got a life-threatning disease and the little time is what we have left with his exsistence that we would not even realize if he died from the disease?wow they have some good mushrooms in canada

agent luke
18 Oct 2006, 14:07
ok I confess I was listening to music when i made it and toned out the drawing part (plus i was stressed):(

Iv'e got it! he was dancing to the music WHILE he was drawing, Hmm..must have been heavy metal:p

Pigbuster
19 Oct 2006, 05:17
I'm guessing that Grounded = No computer.

Kelster23
20 Oct 2006, 03:19
wow they have some good mushrooms in canada

Not to me. I hate mushrooms! Except for in Spagetti Sauce and mushroom soup!:)

Akuryou13
20 Oct 2006, 13:29
Not to me. I hate mushrooms! Except for in Spagetti Sauce and mushroom soup!:)*points up in the air* look! up there! it's a bird! it's a plane!! it's my point!!! :rolleyes:

Paul.Power
21 Oct 2006, 01:18
You saying by him being grounded that he suddenly got a life-threatning disease and the little time is what we have left with his exsistence that we would not even realize if he died from the disease?I don't think he is, no.

Kelster23
21 Oct 2006, 18:31
Congratulations Paul Power, you have made the 100th post in this thread.:rolleyes:

philby4000
21 Oct 2006, 21:19
It's kind of disheartening that a thread containing one completely unreadable comic page gets ten times the replies that a thread that I make containing a whole comic does.:p

SuperBlob
21 Oct 2006, 21:36
It's kind of disheartening that a thread containing one completely unreadable comic page gets ten times the replies that a thread that I make containing a whole comic does.:p

I know the feeling :p

Paul.Power
21 Oct 2006, 21:40
It's kind of disheartening that a thread containing one completely unreadable comic page gets ten times the replies that a thread that I make containing a whole comic does.:pRemind me which thread that was.

philby4000
22 Oct 2006, 02:40
Okay, ten times was probably stretching it a bit, but this thread here (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=27193) only got 50.

You were trying to catch me out on the 'complete comic' bit weren't you?;)

Paul.Power
22 Oct 2006, 03:06
Okay, ten times was probably stretching it a bit, but this thread here (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showthread.php?t=27193) only got 50.

You were trying to catch me out on the 'complete comic' bit weren't you?;)
No, as a matter of fact. I just did a quick search and couldn't find a thread of yours with just ten posts in it. Twenty, yes, but not ten.

philby4000
23 Oct 2006, 10:48
Hmmm, perhaps the problem lies with my aparant ability to kill threads.

Akuryou13
23 Oct 2006, 14:29
no more posting here unless you are twist_worm

*snickers*:D

wormthingy
23 Oct 2006, 22:36
no more posting here unless you are twist_worm

*snickers*:D

that made me laugh like i haven't done in a long time :p
you just made my day