Super_frea: Back with a rather loud pop!

[shadowman]

Aha, your character has a lightsaber, but my character is strategic!

You'll probably have fallen into a hole by the time you pull out the shrink ray. :p


Also, quite unlike most comics, I hope this one uses my actual personality. Usually I'm more of just a prop. :rolleyes:

[super_frea]

You're the main baddie :p

[.JeT]

So, where do i fit in?

I feel very intrigued.. or something

[super_frea]

You'll have to wait and see...
I'm beginning to realise now that I am totally over hyping this comic and should probably flippin' draw it before expectations get so high they're disrupting satellites. It's not going to be amazing fellows lets get that clear now :p

[Metal Alex]

I wonder who will be the main goodie :rolleyes:

[Shadowmoon]

I wonder who will be the main goodie :rolleyes:

Super_frea, obviously.:rolleyes:

Flip your been sarcastic.

ou'll probably have fallen into a hole by the time you pull out the shrink ray

Like member, like worm, my worm is fast, like i am at typing.

My worm has superb jumping abilities.

[Akuryou13]

Yes it is D:
I don't mean to sound like a negative nelly but PLEASE GODDAMIT! Enoughsorry :o

Also, quite unlike most comics, I hope this one uses my actual personality. Usually I'm more of just a prop.wait, you have a specific personality?

You'll have to wait and see...
I'm beginning to realise now that I am totally over hyping this comic and should probably flippin' draw it before expectations get so high they're disrupting satellites. It's not going to be amazing fellows lets get that clear now :mad: ARTZ NOW!! I wanna see this. second time I've ever been an evil guy....I really can't wait to see what possible motivation I could have to join the evil guys :p

Super_frea, obviously.http://evula.org/dragoon/pics/captain.obvious.jpg :p

[shadowman]

You're the main baddie :p

YAY!
I feel loved. :cool:

[ShadowLord]

Requests to be in it,I guess. I don't care where you put me.

[super_frea]

Requests to be in it,I guess. I don't care where you put me.

You don't sound very enthusiastic...

Shadowman
Shadowmoon
Shadowlord

Hmm...

Maybe I should change my name to Shadowfrea

[Plasma]

Requests to be in it,I guess. I don't care where you put me.
You must go as evil!


There shall be no end to this confusion!

[ShadowLord]

You don't sound very enthusiastic...

I just want my sigworm to appear in a comic for once,especially one by a good artist such as you.

Shadowman
Shadowmoon
Shadowlord

Hmm...

Maybe I should change my name to Shadowfrea

I knew you were going to comment on my name.

[super_frea]

I just want my sigworm to appear in a comic for once,especially one by a good artist such as you.
Well shucks I'm sure I can fit you in somewhere.

I knew you were going to comment on my name.
Apologies but it was too good an opportunity to pass up :p

[Pyramid]

Just make a sub-group like the Shadow's Legion or some crap like that and put all the Shadows in just one place

[Akuryou13]

Just make a sub-group like the Shadow's Legion or some crap like that and put all the Shadows in just one placethat would be horrendously corny! I support this idea completely! name suggestion: Shadow Sqauad! or! even better! S.H.A.D.O.W. :p doesn't matter what it stands for :p

[Shadowmoon]

Just make a sub-group like the Shadow's Legion or some crap like that and put all the Shadows in just one place

Meh, Shadow Squad united?

The Super Shadow Squad?

The shocking shadow squad?

[.JeT]

Something simple like "Shadow squad" severs it well. Shadow does go with many things.

[SgtFusion]

Severs?stupid 10-character limit!

[super_frea]

S.H.A.D.O.W. :p doesn't matter what it stands for :p
Some suggestions:

Seriously
Hairy
Apes
Don't
Often
Wash

Some
Hospitals
Are
Demented
Or
Weird

Stupid
Horrendous
Anal
Donor
Obliterates
Widows

Or simply the
Secret
And
Atrociously
Dastardly
Organisation
er...

Word...

Meh, Shadow Squad united?

The Super Shadow Squad?

The shocking shadow squad?

The Shockingly Super Shadow Squad?
Something simple like "Shadow squad" severs it well. Shadow does go with many things.

I prefer Seriously Hairy Apes Don't Often Wash tbh

Severs?stupid 10-character limit!

YES YOU HEARD HIM SERVERS DAMMIT!

http://evula.org/dragoon/pics/captain.obvious.jpg :p

Oh and consider that picture officially jacked ;)

[Akuryou13]

Or simply the
Secret
And
Atrociously
Dastardly
Organisation
er...

Word...you messed that up :p so...... Secret Horribly Attrocious Doom Organization of the World? or something equally bad :p


Oh and consider that picture officially jacked ;) I googled "captain obvious to the rescue" and found that to be the best pic available. feel free to jack it in turn.

[Kelster23]

Such Hatred And Doubt Of World

[Plasma]

Such Hatred And Doubt Of World
See my avatar? That three-eyed girl, her name is World. Without the "the" in front, it seems less like it's referring to this planet and more like it's referring to her.

[robowurmz]

Seriously Hard Apples Don't Override Waterslides.
Several Hippopotamuses Angrily Dumped On William.
Shocking Hellish Angry Dumb Oblique Wimps.

[Plasma]

Shush Huntakilla, Acronyms Don't Offend Women!



Wait, what was that about being a name?

[Shadowmoon]

Cool this an edit of Super_freas one, anyway...

Super Hilarious Acrobatic Dogs Often Wash

[Pyramid]

S-Shadow
H-Hadow
A-Adow
D-Dow
O-Ow
W-W

[shadowman]

How about Shadowman's Horribly Awesome Doombringing Warlords?

[Akuryou13]

How about Shadowman's Horribly Awesome Doombringing Warlords?oh god! oh god yes! please make it so! god! yes! :eek: :D *laughs more*

edit: wait, you're missing the O

[shadowman]

Shadowman's Horribly Awesome Doombringing Oblong Warlords then. :p

I made Aku love something!
Achievement Unlocked.

[SgtFusion]

The URL of the "Achievement Unlocked: Aku Love" link in your signature has "< /br>" at the end.

[Akuryou13]

Shadowman's Horribly Awesome Doombringing Oblong Warlords then. :p

I made Aku love something!
Achievement Unlocked.I really don't see why that's worth an achievement....then again, I don't see why the gordon freeman comparison is either...

[super_frea]

Er... Massive Elongated Fool? :p
'Nuff said.

[shadowman]

I really don't see why that's worth an achievement....then again, I don't see why the gordon freeman comparison is either...

I've got better ones.

But they're on other forums.

[Akuryou13]

Er... Massive Elongated Fool? :p
'Nuff said.yes, but that was at least a very unique insult and one that was very comical given the situation and what-not. :p mostly, it was really unique. as was the paul power point, according to paul. hence why those were achievements.

I've got better ones.

But they're on other forums.those don't really count, then :p

[GrimOswald]

Yeah, 'cause a case of Aku Love is not an achievement. He just showers us with love. Why, every day I wake up and think "Wow, I cannot wait to go on to the Team17 Forums and be embraced by Aku's warm and tender love."

...

So super, any progress regarding the comic? Or are you still in that damn swamp? :p

[GnomeMan]

Yeah, 'cause a case of Aku Love is not an achievement. He just showers us with love. Why, every day I wake up and think "Wow, I cannot wait to go on to the Team17 Forums and be embraced by Aku's warm and tender love."
sounds like it is time for a sing-a-long...
"Aku loves me! This I know,
for the forums tell me so,
little newbs to Him belong,
they are weak but He is strong."

Secret Horrendous Atrocity Doers of the World
Sinister Heralds of Apocalyptic Doom Onto Wormkind

and just for fun:
Stupid Hard Acronyms Don't Often Work
Scum Hats Are Delightful Outer-Wear

[Plasma]

"Aku loves me! This I know,
for the forums tell me so,
little newbs to Him belong,
they are weak but He is strong."

Actually, Gnomeman, Aku does not love
Shadowmoon more than his own right glove.
He only loves the suggestion that he did make
He wouldn't stand the man even if he had cake.
Y'see, Aku would never take part
In being nice, he hasn't the heart.
He really is so god-gamn bitter
That this poetry alone is making him shiver!
It is pretty stupid to say such things like that
He shows less love than Teceech for a hat.
What you just said makes you look like a goose
Aku just has no love for others. Moose!!




Alright, most of you won't understand the Moose (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vogon_poetry) reference.

[Akuryou13]

I can't decide whether I should love both of you or kill you slowly :p

[Squirminator2k]

Love them slowly.

[Akuryou13]

Love them slowly.http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/1305/googleyeyebykhold01td5.gif

[shadowman]

Actually, Gnomeman, Aku does not love
Shadowmoon more than his own right glove.
He only loves the suggestion that he did make
He wouldn't stand the man even if he had cake.
Y'see, Aku would never take part
In being nice, he hasn't the heart.
He really is so god-gamn bitter
That this poetry alone is making him shiver!
It is pretty stupid to say such things like that
He shows less love than Teceech for a hat.
What you just said makes you look like a goose
Aku just has no love for others. Moose!!




Alright, most of you won't understand the Moose (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vogon_poetry) reference.


MY NAME IS SHADOW MAAAN

Jeez. It's even easier to spell than shadowmoon.

Also, I'll write Aku a poem tomorrow.

[Kelster23]

Love them slowly.

If I was drinking something when I read that it would've came out my nose.

[super_frea]

Look who's got his good ol' Slick made avatar back...

Anyway...
"Wow, I cannot wait to go on to the Team17 Forums and be embraced by Aku's warm and tender love."
He is a very gentle lover.

Love them slowly.
It's a good suggestion Aku. You'd probably be very good at that.

So super, any progress regarding the comic? Or are you still in that damn swamp? :p

I'm unsure what you mean with regards to that swamp comment. D:
However with regards to the comic I've just sketched out thee first one, but as I said I have exams all next week so I really need to be revising for my AS levels :(

Never fear though because if it's not done before then, it will be done after...
Wait what? That doesn't make any sense. Oh well super_frea leave it in there an hopefully nobody will notice...

[GrimOswald]

It was just because you were saying before how you were swamped with work and stuff. So I was all like "you still in that swamp dawg?" And you were all like "yea dawg fo shizzle hizzle" and that was that.

[shadowman]

He is a very gentle lover.


I knew it! You HAVE been cheating on me! :mad::mad::mad:




:(

[Metal Alex]

I knew it! You HAVE been cheating on me! :mad::mad::mad:




:(

But... but... I thought you were single... :(

[shadowman]

But... but... I thought you were single... :(

And I thought YOU were single!

Forgive me? :(

[Metal Alex]

And I thought YOU were single!

Forgive me? :(

No. NEVER.

[Shadowmoon]

No. NEVER.

ahhh... forgiveness... the hardest thing to get in life.....:(

[shadowman]

No. NEVER.

I knew you would do this to me!
*runs out, crying*

[Plasma]

ahhh... forgiveness... the hardest thing to get in life.....:(
Pah! You've obviously never tried to get military funding for an Orbital Cannon over Mexico.

[Akuryou13]

Pah! You've obviously never tried to get military funding for an Orbital Cannon over Mexico.gee, go figure.

[super_frea]

All aboard the topic train!

Here's my Alternate Sigworm. I thought I'd post it here also to stop you lot talking about... well what ever the hell it is you're talking about. Forgiveness or something? Who knows?

http://forum.team17.co.uk/attachment.php?attachmentid=31415&stc=1&d=1210950045
SALAD

[shadowman]

I'm digging it, but I'm also confused as to why the inside of the mouth is brighter than the face.

[SgtFusion]

It's...the light from his power source? Maybe?

[Kelster23]

I'm thinking it's because he has darker skin than his mouth.

[twoapenny]

I'm thinking big shiny teeth =)

[SgtFusion]

No, the teeth are shown on his bottom jaw. That's clearly the inside of his mouth. Anyway, when are we going to see some more comics, Super_Frea?

[twoapenny]

Ah, I thought that was a lip. My bad. =)

[Gardy Looo]

That alternate sigworm kicks much butt.
Also, if you're still doing that comic thing, just throw me into any side.

[super_frea]

when are we going to see some more comics, Super_Frea?
Who knows ;)

http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs26/i/2008/152/3/b/Forum_Comic_1_by_SuperFrea.png

Damn Gardy with his most awesome comic. Makes mine look poo. Not real jokes in this one just setting up the retarded plot

Part two in the works and it will feature myself, Metal Alex and Plasma. Never fear though you'll all be in it hopefully at some point.

[shadowman]

How did you know I indulge in the delectable 'Evil Cup A Soup?"

That was one of my best kept secrets!

[Pyramid]

Nice! New comics coming from all corners!
There'll be violence? :D

[super_frea]

Nice! New comics coming from all corners!
There'll be violence? :D

I'm probably going to have to kill certain people considering the amount that requested yes... >:P

How did you know I indulge in the delectable 'Evil Cup A Soup?"

That was one of my best kept secrets!

You told me once.
We use to be very, very close remember. ;)

Oh and here is the deviantart link http://superfrea.deviantart.com/art/Forum-Comic-1-87280040

[shadowman]

You told me once.
We use to be very, very close remember. ;)

Aren't we still? :p

[_Kilburn]

Well done, you broke my awesomeness-meter. :mad: Anyway, even though there aren't real jokes there yet, it was pretty funny, and the art is really nice. Can't wait for the next one.

Is it too late to request?

[Metal Alex]

Aren't we still? :p

use, not used.

ANYWAYS, great one, for a setup. You should be the one getting the 2.000.000$.

[Kelster23]

I said this on dA and I'll say it here too: Put something in about Shadowmoon and his post editing.
I guess you could do it as a crossed out speech bubble or something.

[Shadowmoon]

Great artwork, not very funny, but good storyline so far. Its not just hilarious comics that are good, but comics with a great storyline are good too.

And a cliffhanger is always exciting.....

Good one. Cannot wait for chapter 2.

[GrimOswald]

This was definitely worth the wait. :) Very good for a setup first comic, I look forward to future installments. There WILL be future installments.

One thing I would say is to be careful to avoid the old Tiny Writing pitfall, as some of that borders on that.

[Gardy Looo]

HAHA! That was actually quite funny! Keep going!

[TeDdywoRm]

I really never knew why I'm laughing at Shadowman's face in there in panel one.:p

[.JeT]

There is one thing i don't like only though, it's about Shadowman's expression on the last panel. The effects, his eyes, his posture makes him seem angry except his mouth. That's the mouth of a happy worm. The corners of the mouth should be pointing more downwards.

[Shadowmoon]

I said this on dA and I'll say it here too: Put something in about Shadowmoon and his post editing.
I guess you could do it as a crossed out speech bubble or something.

Bad Idea. That and your making fun of me, which isn't nice........

Infact i hope there are NO big offending parts to me in this comic........

[shadowman]

Oh, learn to take a joke.

It a good thing to be able to laugh at yourself.

[super_frea]

Infact i hope there are NO big offending parts to me in this comic........
I'm saying nothing... D:

Anyway here's a rather violent picture for ya'll
No Shadowmoon it has nothing to do with sex before you ask.
http://superfrea.deviantart.com/art/Violence-87356115
http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs27/i/2008/153/a/1/Violence_by_SuperFrea.png

[Shadowmoon]

Oh, learn to take a joke.

It a good thing to be able to laugh at yourself.

Yup i laugh at myself when it's funny.......

But that would just make fun of me, and the way other people post......

Its like you'll never stop making fun of me.......

It has to stop......

so i hope there are none and i will be happy......

I saw the pic, not violent enough..

Put some knives and guts on next one!

[Akuryou13]

Bad Idea. That and your making fun of me, which isn't nice........

Infact i hope there are NO big offending parts to me in this comic........dude. he's going to put in whatever he wants. learn to take a joke. unless he specifically attacks you then just accept it as humor. if you can't laugh at yourself how can you laugh at others?

edit: I apparently just sat with this reply typed and ready for a while :p nice lineart there, superfrea.

[super_frea]

I saw the pic, not violent enough..

Put some knives and guts on next one!
Can you judge it in terms of the artwork?
Rather than whether or not it's violent enough...

Like Aku did on DA :cool:

[super_frea]

DOUBLE POSTING QUOTE TIME
Aren't we still?
I don't think we'll ever be as physically intimate as we once were dear Shadowman

Well done, you broke my awesomeness-meter. Anyway, even though there aren't real jokes there yet, it was pretty funny, and the art is really nice. Can't wait for the next one.

Is it too late to request?
Thanks man :)
It's never too late

use, not used.

ANYWAYS, great one, for a setup. You should be the one getting the 2.000.000$.

2,000,000 POUNDS! you turd. I'm English remember D:

I said this on dA and I'll say it here too: Put something in about Shadowmoon and his post editing.
I guess you could do it as a crossed out speech bubble or something.

I'm sure I'll do something along those lines

Great artwork, not very funny, but good storyline so far. Its not just hilarious comics that are good, but comics with a great storyline are good too.

And a cliffhanger is always exciting.....

Good one. Cannot wait for chapter 2.
Yeah as I said this one wasn't meant to be particularly funny. It was just a storyline setup. I tried to implement some humor though. The next ones will be more joke focused

This was definitely worth the wait. Very good for a setup first comic, I look forward to future installments. There WILL be future installments.

One thing I would say is to be careful to avoid the old Tiny Writing pitfall, as some of that borders on that.

Thank man. I'll make the writing bigger next time.

HAHA! That was actually quite funny! Keep going!

TANKYOU :):):)

I really never knew why I'm laughing at Shadowman's face in there in panel one.

He looks like a mighty old bugger there D:

There is one thing i don't like only though, it's about Shadowman's expression on the last panel. The effects, his eyes, his posture makes him seem angry except his mouth. That's the mouth of a happy worm. The corners of the mouth should be pointing more downwards.
That is true but for some reason he still looks pretty angry to me :-/

ALSO YOU ARSES!
Comment on that picture I just did. I'm quite pleased with how it came out and I'm interested to know what you think.

[Gardy Looo]

That last picture is quite nice. Although it seems his head is made out of pottery.

[Plasma]

Why are Shadowmoon's glasses always changing?
I mean:
Panel 1: Regular half-moon, as it should be.
Panel 2: His eyes ONLY poke through the glasses, while the parts of the eyes outside of the glass are regular. Which also makes it look like he has his eyelids half-closed, resulting in looking both really surprised and really unsurprised at the same time. In a bad way.
Panel 3: The rims aren't connected to the lenses.
Panel 4: The lenses are missing completely.
Panel 5: To accompany the lack of lenses, one of the rims has been removed too.
Panel 6: ...Full-moon glasses? It's the only reason I can think up of why it looks like his eye is on top of the bandana.
Panel 7: Lenses are AWOL.
Panel 8: There's only one rim and no lenses again.

[_Kilburn]

Comment on that picture I just did. I'm quite pleased with how it came out and I'm interested to know what you think.

Oh gawd, the details. Yeah, the worm has a pretty thick skin and the cuts are perfectly linear, but I think it fits well with your sharp drawing style. It looks a little unusual, but it looks good. :p

Thanks man :)
It's never too late

Yay thanks! Well, if you can include my sigworm somewhere in the Evil team... :cool: The profile is in my sig, it's a little outdated (and it still doesn't have a background), but basically he is a mad weapon inventor who is extremely clumsy and has a very unstable personality. Also, he is obsessed by anything related to toilets.

[Metal Alex]

2,000,000 POUNDS! you turd. I'm English remember D:

You can always take it to a bank :p

[shadowman]

Shadowmoon's glasses

You're a pain.

I rather liked the picture. Reminds me of splapp for some reason.

OFFAL

[super_frea]

Heeeeeeere's number 2
http://superfrea.deviantart.com/art/Forum-Comic-2-87378450
http://fc08.deviantart.com/fs28/i/2008/153/f/c/Forum_Comic_2_by_SuperFrea.png

[Shadowmoon]

Lol.

Especially to that "evil idea" i made. rofl.

I demanz MOAR!

[Kelster23]

haha MA is drooling at the end... and you're stealing Plasma's herbal tea?
Oh and the gore picture seriously reminds me of the one minute laters in Huntakilla's thread, just without someone eating it. :)

[_Kilburn]

Shadowmoon's grin on the 6th panel is priceless. And the last panel was awesome as well. The only problem here is Plasma, who looks pretty weird in my opinion. Dunno why, maybe his black cape is not visible enough. Other than that, really good. And I love the "evil idea".

[Plasma]

The only problem here is Plasma, who looks pretty weird in my opinion.
Probably because he didn't add colour to a cape that should've been pure black.

[Metal Alex]

Gotta love ma's old school pasta...

aaah... the good old days...

edit: Anyways, in case you weren't aware, my "power" is to draw stuff, but them becoming real. Of course, since it's not drawn properly most of the time, it doesn't have to work as desired all the times... (Draws gun, gun barks, yay)

[Pyramid]

LOVE it!!
Both the comic and the gore art
Violence is the key to pure awesome art :D

[shadowman]

I love being an evil boss.

But I need a slightly more competent minion. :p

[GrimOswald]

I love being an evil boss.

But I need a slightly more competent minion. :p

Which is where I come in! Right super?

...right? :(

Seriously though, nice. I love MA's expressions.

[Shadowmoon]

I love being an evil boss.

But I need a slightly more competent minion. :p

You have one. Its just in this comic i've been brainwashed.....

[Gardy Looo]

Brilliant comic! Jumping on cars must be the most evil thing possible in the year 3000.

[TeDdywoRm]

Nice!

*Checks the last 4 panels*

Power Stealer > Herbal Tea > Do a barrel Roll > Gir! Fetch the bucket!

Lol!:D

[super_frea]

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
*waits for Shadowman/moon's response*
Oh and there's a reference in there somewhere... see if you can spot it :p
http://superfrea.deviantart.com/art/Forum-Comic-3-87459669

http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs25/i/2008/154/d/0/Forum_Comic_3_by_SuperFrea.png

[.JeT]

Cool! I effing OWNED them!

You really got the idea of my weapons function.

And Shadowmoon's expression! Oh god. NYAH!

[Akuryou13]

ROFL!!! that was the best ending EVER! :cool:

[Shadowmoon]

So is that the end of the comic?

I didn't like chapter 3, btw.

[super_frea]

And Shadowmoon's expression! Oh god. NYAH!
Haha! That made me rofl when I was drawing it. Glad to see i'm not the only one who found that amusing.
I didn't mean to draw it like that, but I think it looks better :p

ROFL!!! that was the best ending EVER! :cool:
:cool:
So is that the end of the comic?
Of course not you tit! Do you see THE END at the end of it?
I didn't like chapter 3, btw.
I wonder why that is?
XD

[Pyramid]

I'm in and there's two deaths on this one
Gold star for you!

[Shadowmoon]

Oh! i thought it was the end! and i wouldn't like that chapter if it weren't the end.

So i did like it, but i request i come back to life!:cool:

[Plasma]

Oh! i thought it was the end! and i wouldn't like that chapter if it weren't the end.
Yes, no need to worry, the comic will go on. It's just the end of your role in the comic, that's all.

:p

[.JeT]

Muahaha!

Go me. I end LIFES!

[shadowman]

BAHAHAHWAHAHAH!
Funny as hell, man. How did you know I died? Do you follow me around or something? Wait, I'm still dea-*thud*

Little did you guys know that this is all completely true. :p

[TeDdywoRm]

TEAM SHADOW'S BLASTING OF AGAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNN!!!
Not the pokemon thing again..:p

[Gardy Looo]

Brilliant comic, as always.

[shadowman]

I think SFrea thought I wouldn't like it.


It was funny as hell.

[tal05]

yo super_frea?

can you feature me in one of your comics?

http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=653445&postcount=1

http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=653445&postcount=1

thats my sig worm

:)Thanks:)

[SgtFusion]

Here (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=648768&postcount=1616) is my sigworm.

[super_frea]

Yes, no need to worry, the comic will go on. It's just the end of your role in the comic, that's all.

Aaah but is it? :p

TEAM SHADOW'S BLASTING OF AGAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNN!!!
Not the pokemon thing again..

It's Pokemania!

yo super_frea?

can you feature me in one of your comics?

http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=653445&postcount=1

http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=653445&postcount=1

thats my sig worm

Thanks:)

Here (http://forum.team17.co.uk/showpost.php?p=648768&postcount=1616) is my sigworm.

Now, now fellows no need to force yourselves into the comic you will both probably be in at some stage

ANYWAY!
Here is number 3.5
http://superfrea.deviantart.com/art/Forum-Comic-3-5-87752524
http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs29/i/2008/157/4/0/Forum_Comic_3_5_by_SuperFrea.png

That's right folks it's cheesy, get the audience involved time! Which body is Kilburn going to take with him back to his laboratory for his experiments?

YOU DECIDE!
Oh god speaking of which there is a new series of Big Brother on tonight that my gf is going to want to watch BALLS

[Plasma]

I vote he picks Shadowmaon.

[.JeT]

Har har Plasma.

Shadowman, i vote.

[Akuryou13]

oh god.....the choices!

I think I'm gunna say shadowmoon...

[tal05]

ShadowmAn, because you might find out he is not actually a worm but a slug in disguise :rolleyes:

[Shadowmoon]

Shadowman....

[tal05]

I Said Shadowmoon God Dang It!

[.JeT]

Shadowman....

Nothing says you can't vote for yourself! :P

[Shadowmoon]

I Said Shadowmoon God Dang It!

*slaps forehead*

[Metal Alex]

Shadowmoon. I'm curious about the result. Or the lack of it...

[_Kilburn]

Yay I'm in. I hope I will last longer than the two other evil lads. :cool:

Also, Shadowmoon. Because making experiments on people from the future is usually more interesting. :p

[.JeT]

Yay I'm in. I hope I will last longer than the two other evil lads. :cool:

Also, Shadowmoon. Because making experiments on people from the future is usually more interesting. :p

They have developed EXTRA ORGANIIICS

[shadowman]

I'm surprised so many people voted for me. I vote me too, because I loved seeing me die and I'd love to see what you can do with my corpse. I don't think plasma's vote counts, though, because he always calls Shadowmoon by my name. :p But any vote for me is appreciated. :p

[.JeT]

Second thoughts, screw all that: I vote Kilburn kills some other forum member and use their corpse instead!

You sneaky bugger.

[Plasma]

You sneaky bugger.
Well, I would've said "carries on with grave robbing instead", but there isn't any previous sigworm that did die.

[.JeT]

That's true, though.

Well, by any means i think we know what happens to the character. Well, i think i do. Or.. something.

[super_frea]

Do tell.
I don't even know myself yet :p

[.JeT]

Oh ok.. I thought they would have a continuing role, by _Kilburn experimenting on them and then they get revived? Maybe look horribly mutated while you're at it, too.

That's what i think will happen :)

[_Kilburn]

Me wants army of horribly mutated Shadowmoon clones. :cool:

Though my sigworm is more experienced in weaponry and technology than biology and all that stuff.

[.JeT]

He would just recreate his crushed body with mechanical substitutes and make him like an unstoppable part-iron worm.

[_Kilburn]

Go for it. :cool:

[shadowman]

I honestly think shadowmoon is mutated enough. :p

If he gets to be an experiment, can I come back like they do in soap operas? Show up right in the middle of a dramatic scene with a neat scar?

[Pigbuster]

This is good stuff and etc.

And I vote Shadowman.

[Kelster23]

I vote Vader!

[Gardy Looo]

I vote Shadowman.
If people in the future use organs as currency, _Kilburn won't have much to work on Shadowmoon.

[tal05]

so far shadowman is winning

[shadowman]

Yay me!
*dance*dance*

[.JeT]

Well anyways Sfrea, as i can see, (Or at least think it is) you ink your pictures and scan then? Looks like it to me.

If so, please tell me which markers you use for it. I am planning on getting a set.

[robowurmz]

You can draw me!

If you don't recall, it's a sectioned, steel tail, with two metal plates on the back of the head.

Eyes have "hollow" pupils, because of their lasering capabilities.

Robowurmz E-10F is also highly moddable; however an engineer is required to design and test mods on him. Such as jetpacks and so on.

EDIT: Also, hooray Invader Zim references.

[super_frea]

Well anyways Sfrea, as i can see, (Or at least think it is) you ink your pictures and scan then? Looks like it to me.

If so, please tell me which markers you use for it. I am planning on getting a set.
Yeah I sketch them out in an HB Pencil and then go over them using a fineliner. It appears the fineliner I use is made in Japan D: but "Marqueur A Dessin" is French so don't ask me where the Fineliner's from because I honestly don't know XD

You can draw me!

If you don't recall, it's a sectioned, steel tail, with two metal plates on the back of the head.

Eyes have "hollow" pupils, because of their lasering capabilities.

Robowurmz E-10F is also highly moddable; however an engineer is required to design and test mods on him. Such as jetpacks and so on.

EDIT: Also, hooray Invader Zim references.
Invader Zim > Everything

Also have you got any pictures of him?
He sounds quite difficult to draw :p

[SgtFusion]

Umm..are you still doing this?

[hdhdhd]

Invader Zim > Everything


I hear that they might be recontinuing the series and making a tv movie.

[Akuryou13]

I hear that they might be recontinuing the series and making a tv movie.evidence, information, or something concrete or we ignore you :p

[super_frea]

I hear that they might be recontinuing the series and making a tv movie.

I have found no evidence of this what-so-ever.

On a side note I'm going to do a group pic and I was wondering if anyone wanted to be in it?

[tal05]

I have found no evidence of this what-so-ever.

On a side note I'm going to do a group pic and I was wondering if anyone wanted to be in it?

It would be great if you could include be old chap.

You know my sig right?

http://forum.team17.co.uk/attachment.php?attachmentid=31444&stc=1&d=1212428400

[Akuryou13]

just peg everyone down as wanting to be in it :p

[Shadowmoon]

I have found no evidence of this what-so-ever.

On a side note I'm going to do a group pic and I was wondering if anyone wanted to be in it?

yeah. Me, please.

[robowurmz]

Boing! Me too!

[Plasma]

On a side note I'm going to do a group pic and I was wondering if anyone wanted to be in it?
*I REQUEST!*

Twice. Put me in twice, at both ends. Like in very old school photos, where the camera had to rotate around to catch everyone in the picture, which gives some people on one end enough time to sneak on the other end before the camera reached that end.

[shadowman]

Dang it, I wanted to request before plasma.

*Requestamundo*

[Pyramid]

I would like to be on that pic, sir...

This is a request

[Kelster23]

Me please.

[Metal Alex]

I'm so original I'm going to request too.

[hdhdhd]

Yay me too

[poninja]

I ReQuEsT :-/

[Snoozy]

Surely, no group picture can be whole or complete without a worm with a jetpack and a cyan mohawk.

[BuffaloKid]

Ah, but equally surely, Snoozy, a worm with a jetpack and a cyan mohawk just wouldnt look right without a worm with horns, flame eyes, a cape and a burning sock puppet to balance him out.

... That was a request, btw

[Plasma]

I totally agree.


*I request to be drawn with a cyan mohawk, jetpack, horns, flame eyes,and a burning sock puppet*

[Shadowmoon]

Everyone seems to be coming back lately........

Super_frea, are you continuing your comic?

[.JeT]

Oh snaps, I didn't request. I roughly remember doing it...

[shadowman]

I request to be drawn as whatever plasma says while still maintaining my original look.

Also pie must be in the picture.

[Shadowmoon]

Also don't forget my flaming sword.:p

[Gardy Looo]

I request. The new sig, btw.

[Snoozy]

I totally agree.


*I request to be drawn with a cyan mohawk, jetpack, horns, flame eyes,and a burning sock puppet*
Well, I gotta admit... I was kinda asking for it... but the cyan mohawk is way too magnificient to share the head with two of those feeble horns :p

[super_frea]

Super_frea, are you continuing your comic?
I have no idea. When I have enough time to sit down for a few hours and I'm not doing this group pic then perhaps it will continue. Don't hold your breath though D:

Also come on fellows
MORE PEEPS ARE NEEDED REQUEST YOU MOTHER ARSING TITS OFF!!12@'

the first person to spot this hidden message gets to be drawn in the form of the incredible hulk... the end

[.JeT]

Saw the message. Incredible hulk. Durr.

[shadowman]

Yes, but I SPOTTED IT.

Photographic proof later.

[.JeT]

Uh... But I'm the president of the Omniverse. Your argument is invalid.

That also means i own page 15.

EDIT: Dangumit.

[Plasma]

That also means i own page 15.
You've been overruled! Page 15 now belongs to me!

[.JeT]

You've been overruled! Page 15 now belongs to me!

I am now sad.. Ahem.

Back to topic?

[SgtFusion]

I request!!!11!!1!

[super_frea]

Here's a doodle I did that tuned out quite nice :)
http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs32/i/2008/197/5/6/Pattern_Frea_by_SuperFrea.jpg
I'll start on the group picture soon. But it isn't too late to request so come on fellows DO IT!

[tal05]

Here's a doodle I did that tuned out quite nice :)
I'll start on the group picture soon. But it isn't too late to request so come on fellows DO IT!

Can i have a single pic of my sigworm?

(this may or may not influence the priority of my request but i will be creating a new thread tommorow with a few finished requests of the following peoples sigs :

1. You (Super_frea if your forgot)
2. Plasma
3. Kelster

:P)

Oh yes and also... awesum! :D

[Plasma]

SFrea, I think it's safe to say you have a bit too much time to waste. Can't you at least do something productive with that time?

Or, more specifically, spend it on drawing me?

(this may or may not influence the priority of my request but i will be creating a new thread tommorow with a few finished requests of the following peoples sigs :

2. Plasma
3. Kelster
I vote that Tal cannot be infraced for this off-topic message as it is distinctly Godly enough to be posted here too.

:o

[GrimOswald]

Oh go on then, throw me in the group picture. :cool: (Sigworm in...signature)

And whoa that is one confuzzling hat. Pretty cool though, how long did it take?

[Liketyspli]

Ehm, yes put MUSCULAR WORM! WHOOSH! in that group pic you be talkin' 'bout. :-/

[.JeT]

I Request.

[hdhdhd]

Here's a doodle I did that tuned out quite nice :)


I can neither find the entrance or exit to that maze! It is bogus!

[super_frea]

HAI GUYZ
I was watching Donnie Darko the other day and it inspired me to create this
http://fc74.deviantart.com/fs42/i/2009/066/a/9/Frank_the_Rabbit_Worm_by_SuperFrea.jpg
A Frank the Rabbit/Worm Hybrid thing straight from the belly of hell itself.
Hope you like it
DA Link: http://SuperFrea.deviantart.com/art/Frank-the-Rabbit-Worm-115144111

[Error404]

I do! :D ·... ··. ..·

[Pyramid]

DAMN
I always wanted to make a Frank-Worm, but I'm too damn lazy. Donnie Darko is my favorite movie!
That's too cool
Loved the eyes and the form of the skull
Nice work! :D

[super_frea]

It is an awesome movie.
Also I coloured that other picture I did a while back. Ignore the crude background and lens flare, I was feeling lazy.
http://fc46.deviantart.com/fs45/i/2009/067/1/3/Violence__Coloured__by_SuperFrea.jpg
Edit: http://superfrea.deviantart.com/art/Violence-Coloured-115286102

[MtlAngelus]

Hideous use of lens flare is hideous. D:

Also, Frank Worm = Win, so I forgive you for the lens flare.

[Error404]

Well... Angelus already pointed the flare thing so i'll approach the other points:

• There's blood on his face but on on his skull, brain and flesh. Also, the blood looks rather flat compared to the other parts.
• The worms seems to be made of salmon styrofoam. The cuts are too clean, steady and homogeneous and there's no trace of blood in there whatsoever.
• The inside of the worm's torax looks.... empty... :p
• You kinda missed the target by a few inches with your colouring there. The inside of the mouth, below the tongue, has a thin white line contouring the inside of the lineart, much like an inner glow.
• The overall shading looks too subtle and waaaaaaaaaay to blurry.

The impression i have is that this was a nice lineart but didn't quite fit a colouring job. It would've stayed better in its original. :)

Sorry if i was to harsh with the critiques... but it's the way we learn. :p

[super_frea]

No your critique is always welcome. :p In fact it was exactly what I was looking for, as this is the first image I have ever tried to digitally colour in it's entirety. So any critique is welcome.

How does one shade well using photoshop? I've tried a few different techniques but again as you said the best one i could come up with is still far too blurry.

Any colouring tips would be greatly appreciated.

[Saffya]

Cel shading can be easily pulled off by making shapes with the pen tool, but for softer shading it's a case of using a brush that isn't too soft, but not to hard either.

As for colouring, the best thing to do first is to clean up the lineart, and that can be done by different means but I'll let you in on the way I do it with hand inked lines.

I use Inkscape [kinda like to Illustrator as GIMP is to Photoshop], import my lineart to that, and use a "trace bitmap" feature to make a crisp lineart with no white in, just transparency. It'll take some goes to make it look as accurately like the original as possible, and when satisfied, save it as a PNG and import it to Photoshop. Optionally you can remove some ugly looking lines with the pen tool, selecting it and pressing delete.

Then you make a new layer to go under the lineart layer, and colour on that. In my opinion doing that is the best way to prevent the paint fill tool look.

I know I waffle but that's pretty much the way I do it.

[Error404]

I do it entirely different.

If i start on paper (which is becoming more and more rare) i scan the lineart on 200dpi and send it directly to photoshop.

There, on a new layer, i digitaly ink the whole deal as if i would be doing with a pen on paper. For that, i use a hard 19px brush with just the pen pressure afecting just the brush size.

Once that is done, i create a "flats" layer right below the new inked lineart one. There i lay all my flat colours. A good practice would be to make different layers for each "element" of your picture. You can divide them into colours or elements, but it's always good to separate things in different layers.

Then i create another layer on the top of the flats and set it to multiply. At this point i use the exact same colour i used for the flats to shade the picture. The multiply attribute will make the trick of turning it into shades.

This is basically what i do. Sometimes i add more layers for the shading, sometimes i use a soft brush with the pressure set to control the flow. It varies.

But i think one of your main problems there is that you didn't draw this pic thinking 3D. Which is fine unless you want to shade it. As you know, flats give life and shades give volume. When you try to give volume to something that was planned to be bidimensional, problems occour.

If you don't like cell shading and want to follow a "softer" style, i suggest you practice shading curtains and then some human faces. It's a good way to start to feel the softness.

[super_frea]

FIRST REQUEST GETS TO BE DRAWN! m'kay.

[poninja]

me :cool: ...............................

[super_frea]

One dost not know what thou sigworm is composed of.

[Roboslob]

Aw, before you edited your post it looked like you were requesting to have your sigworm drawn. By yourself. Oh well, I missed the wagon.

[super_frea]

Also I'm considering continuing my comic if enough people care or even remember it. Not as many people from the comic seem to come on this forum as much now though so it might seem a bit dated.

[Roboslob]

Well, I just finished looking through your art thread here, and may I say I enjoyed the visit. Although quite different, I enjoyed the "eyes that do not care that they have a massive tumor forcing them out of the skull." Thats not meant to be sarcastic if it comes across that way, merely trying to explain it to myself in a way other than, "cuz thats what he drew."

[Killertron]

I do not understand Roboslob.
However I do much like the art!