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Johnnynet
6 May 2006, 01:28
Well Come monday I will try to upload my New improved art so might wanna say a prayer and stuff But I came long way from those evil ages
(I wanna personally thank Akuryou13, Dim, Splapp, Slick, Traxada for losing faith but keeping me on the right track)

pilot62
6 May 2006, 10:01
Improved you say?

Alien King
6 May 2006, 11:05
Well let us see your new improved art. I don't think I ever saw your old art anyway....

Johnnynet
8 May 2006, 21:17
Correction I will be post my art Wensday my schools scanner is having issue's

Akuryou13
9 May 2006, 13:57
(I wanna personally thank Akuryou13, Dim, Splapp, Slick, Traxada for losing faith but keeping me on the right track)no problem at all! I'll lose faith in you any day of the week. :rolleyes: ;)

Johnnynet
10 May 2006, 16:35
On a other note art will come in few mins Im trying to upload as I type
EDIT: Here you go peoples
http://img78.imageshack.us/my.php?image=worm3cx.jpg

Plasma
10 May 2006, 18:30
Curvier lines are the order of the day.
Edit: The eyes are facing the viewer, yet the mouth is pointing forward.

Liketyspli
10 May 2006, 18:38
the shades are wrong, the sun is up right, and the shades are up left. they must be down left if the sun is up right. Oh and try one kind of cloud not 3 kinds of em :P i like the grass. that looks funny.

Akuryou13
10 May 2006, 21:34
that's........well.....kinda crap :p
the shading is misplaced as was just said.
the mouth looks COMPLETELY wrong on the side of the face like that when the eyes are facing forward.
the clouds looks squiggly and very rushed.
the lines on the worm are very very sketchy.
and finally, the eyebrows are misaligned with the eyes themselves.....your worm's a mutant! :p

Johnnynet
11 May 2006, 01:13
Yes I did Sketch it, I messed up with the mouth Yea Im Kinda experimenting with shading... Three of the clouds are mine (the straight puffy clouds) friend did 2 for some reason when i lent him my sketch book... I ment to make his eyes look towards the right...
Also on another note Im getting sketching/drawing pencils. and Im posting up somthing different from worms that experiments with shading...

pilot62
11 May 2006, 17:12
To be fair, it is improved, and it isn't mind-bogglingly terrible, but it isn't that great.
The eyes and the mouth, as have been said, don't go with each other at all, next time make it so that they work together.

Johnnynet
13 May 2006, 17:07
To be fair, it is improved, and it isn't mind-bogglingly terrible, but it isn't that great.
The eyes and the mouth, as have been said, don't go with each other at all, next time make it so that they work together.
Yea working on it currently... Expect shading experiment bout wensday or so

Johnnynet
19 May 2006, 16:33
Okay bit late but its here finally Shading experiment

>DoomWorm<
19 May 2006, 16:59
Okay bit late but its here finally Shading experiment
Is the ground made of mirror?

Plasma
19 May 2006, 17:08
1: Try not to make everything slanted.
2: If you look at the shadow of the house, it shouldnt have a line going through it. It's a shadow, not a mirror.

Johnnynet
22 May 2006, 16:40
1: Try not to make everything slanted.
2: If you look at the shadow of the house, it shouldnt have a line going through it. It's a shadow, not a mirror.
hmm that was actually a boundary so i knew what should actually shade in I thought it would fade while doing the shading but I guess put too much pressure on the pencil. Also not every thing is slanted i only made the other sidewalk slanted other wise everything is good

Plasma
22 May 2006, 18:06
hmm that was actually a boundary so i knew what should actually shade in I thought it would fade while doing the shading but I guess put too much pressure on the pencil. Also not every thing is slanted i only made the other sidewalk slanted other wise everything is good
The house - tree combination makes things look slanted.

pilot62
22 May 2006, 19:09
Do fences normally go off into the sky?
I'd work on perspective if I were you.

Alien King
22 May 2006, 19:12
Do fences normally go off into the sky?
I thought it was a ladder at first.

pilot62
22 May 2006, 19:21
I thought it was a garden path, but its because of a lack of perspective we make these mistakes.

Kelster23
23 May 2006, 07:00
Do fences normally go off into the sky?
I'd work on perspective if I were you.
1: Try not to make everything slanted.
2: If you look at the shadow of the house, it shouldnt have a line going through it. It's a shadow, not a mirror.
Perhaps he was making mirror-land.
no problem at all! I'll lose faith in you any day of the week. :rolleyes: ;)
How inspiring, you're very supportive.
And about that worm, to me it looks like it's plotting something. (evil)

Johnnynet
2 Jun 2006, 21:02
Do fences normally go off into the sky?
I'd work on perspective if I were you.
its a side walk stone sidewalk and Ill let this die now cause im quite busy with school related stuff

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