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agent luke
17 Aug 2008, 01:04
Yes, tis` me, mister "repentent but learning" himself! yeah, i nearly fell over when i saw that most of you people i knew back in the day are still on this site, anyway, i have for you now, a cartoon "TEST", i wanted some judgement on it, its a short little gangster thing i made, most of the symbols and stuff will be used in the official cartoon, but let me know what you think about it, i couldn't really find a good sound for the "bullet traveling" scene, oh well.
http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gangstatf3.swf

Pyramid
17 Aug 2008, 01:27
The animated moves are good but the drawings could use more effort
Those giant lines on the bullet scene is really bad
And I don't get it why it's called Gangsters as I didn't see any gangster on the animation :confused:

super_frea
17 Aug 2008, 01:32
And I don't get it why it's called Gangsters as I didn't see any gangster on the animation :confused:
I think everyone in it is meant to be gansta. :p
It's alright but it has absolutely nothing to do with Worms.
D:

Akuryou13
17 Aug 2008, 03:47
3 points:
1. why is this posted here?
2. the animation is good, the drawing is horrible.
3. lock this thread unless worms are included soon.

TeDdywoRm
17 Aug 2008, 14:55
3 points:
1. why is this posted here?
2. the animation is good, the drawing is horrible.
3. lock this thread unless worms are included soon.
Yeah, the animation is good, it's just that the drawing is really bad..-_-'

Shadowmoon
17 Aug 2008, 16:29
The drawing isn't good.
The animation is.
Worms drawings would be super-swell though, considering that's what this fan-art forum is for.....

agent luke
17 Aug 2008, 17:35
Got couple pic now, WORM pics

Melon
17 Aug 2008, 17:48
On the plus side, you have improved, but that's not really saying too much, if you don't mind me saying that ;)
Ditch those texture effects from those worms pictures. They're totally unnecessary and look horrible.

Shadowmoon
17 Aug 2008, 17:53
The orange colour as the shading is just.... wrong

Pyramid
17 Aug 2008, 18:16
In what format you saved that thing?

TeDdywoRm
17 Aug 2008, 18:28
In what format you saved that thing?
The format is PNG.

Pyramid
17 Aug 2008, 18:47
But why is like that?
Was those bad effects made on purpose? :confused:

Paul.Power
17 Aug 2008, 19:07
"Watch me LEAN FORWARD AGGRESSIVELY to DEMONSTRATE how COOL I am"
"I will stare GRIMLY and INTENSELY at the CURIOUSLY OBLONG EXPLOSION coming out of my hand"

shadowman
17 Aug 2008, 21:47
Ugh.
I'm sorry, but those are INCREDIBLY bad. The shape is all wrong. They look like snakes.

Traxada
18 Aug 2008, 01:01
Yeah as an animation student myself, I have to say that flash movie made me vomit. Have a nice day!

Akuryou13
18 Aug 2008, 01:16
are you doing an inner bevel and a texture overlay on worms?! seriously, it's entirely unnecessary to stack effects like that. the bevel is useless anyway in terms of drawing. it's good for web-design and such like that. the texturing has to be appropriate. you don't put a rock texture on someone's shirt, for example.
the shape of the worms is absolutely horrendous and the only reason I don't want to vomit is because it's such an extreme leap forward compared to your old art....unfortunately, that's like saying getting a punch to the face is an improvement over getting a kick to the groin.
if you want to draw stuff in a public setting you need to first learn how to draw straight lines. after that you need to learn curved lines. only then can you put them together to form shapes.
seriously, you are absolutely horrible at art. go take an art class or something.

agent luke
18 Aug 2008, 03:34
Yeah i'm just gonna give up on art, i'll stick with cartoons, i'd be a good cartoon writer, ALL over the web where iv'e posted my cartoons, iv'e gotten comments such as "Nice, you know the art kinda sucked, but nice ideas!" and "good plot and stuff but sucky art" yeah, but noone really WANTS a cartoon idea-list, but usually i just remember....Nobody i know in person can make cartoons but I CAN! HAHAHA!! PS: oh yeah people, move on about the kelster thing, that was when i was like 11 or 12, thats when i went for any chick that i saw.

Splapp
18 Aug 2008, 13:33
Looks like Aku's gigantic finger exploded in that pic up there. :cool:

robowurmz
18 Aug 2008, 15:46
Yeah i'm just gonna give up on art, i'll stick with cartoons, i'd be a good cartoon writer, ALL over the web where iv'e posted my cartoons, iv'e gotten comments such as "Nice, you know the art kinda sucked, but nice ideas!" and "good plot and stuff but sucky art" yeah, but noone really WANTS a cartoon idea-list, but usually i just remember....Nobody i know in person can make cartoons but I CAN! HAHAHA!! PS: oh yeah people, move on about the kelster thing, that was when i was like 11 or 12, thats when i went for any chick that i saw.
But you can't make cartoons. You can make jokes. Cartoons are about the visual style mixed with jokes.

FutureWorm
18 Aug 2008, 16:31
Yeah i'm just gonna give up on art, i'll stick with cartoons, i'd be a good cartoon writer, ALL over the web where iv'e posted my cartoons, iv'e gotten comments such as "Nice, you know the art kinda sucked, but nice ideas!" and "good plot and stuff but sucky art" yeah, but noone really WANTS a cartoon idea-list, but usually i just remember....Nobody i know in person can make cartoons but I CAN! HAHAHA!! PS: oh yeah people, move on about the kelster thing, that was when i was like 11 or 12, thats when i went for any chick that i saw.
it's still hilarious and i'm sure you're still the exact same way
by the way the poem in your signature is even worse than this art

Liketyspli
18 Aug 2008, 20:17
i'd be a good cartoon writer.I'm sorry but a cartoon with so-called "gangstas" is a good idea? People who call themselves "gangsta" are the most pathetic people on earth and a cartoon of it would be even more pathetic. :-/
EDIT:
Oh, I'm sorry, I forgot something, "gangstas" aren't the most pathetic, Emos are. "Gangstas" come second.

Pyramid
18 Aug 2008, 22:56
I'm sorry but a cartoon with so-called "gangsta's" is a good idea? People who call themselves "gangsta" are the most pathetic people on earth and a cartoon of it would be even more pathetic. :-/
That depends... If the cartoon was only about gangstas dying in horrible pain, I would watch it...
But a cartoon is supposed tobe funny, and that's not funny at all...Nothing about gangstas can be funny, except for jokes moking them

WormGod
18 Aug 2008, 23:14
Yikes, that animation is bad.
First, if you're going to do tweens, at least make some DECENT articulation. Mend any gaps, and make enough joints to have a variety of body poses.
Next, what is up with that bullet animation. Seriously. I can't even give advice it's so bad.
Also, nothing to do with Team17. At least pump your pre-teen egestions in pre-teen toilets such as Newgrounds rather than here.
ooh, burn

Kelster23
19 Aug 2008, 06:48
At least the colors are right.

robowurmz
19 Aug 2008, 07:18
At least the colors are right.
Except for the nice orange line running down Luke's back.

Metal Alex
19 Aug 2008, 22:25
I somehow like the ducky lips. It's original.

agent luke
20 Aug 2008, 03:12
I'm sorry but a cartoon with so-called "gangstas" is a good idea? People who call themselves "gangsta" are the most pathetic people on earth and a cartoon of it would be even more pathetic. :-/
EDIT:
Oh, I'm sorry, I forgot something, "gangstas" aren't the most pathetic, Emos are. "Gangstas" come second.
LIKE HOLY FLIP-OUT, geez you people its just art, and besides! that gangsta thing wasn't my "Big" idea, i just made that gansta thing, as a random shoot-out test, my BIG ideas are the ones where the dudes talk! :p

MtlAngelus
20 Aug 2008, 03:40
LIKE HOLY FLIP-OUT, geez you people its just art, and besides! that gangsta thing wasn't my "Big" idea, i just made that gansta thing, as a random shoot-out test, my BIG ideas are the ones where the dudes talk! :p
I'm gonna review u nad ur... stuff.
UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY.
There you go. That'll be FIVE thousand dollars.

FutureWorm
20 Aug 2008, 03:51
I'm gonna review u nad ur... stuff.
UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY.
There you go. That'll be FIVE thousand dollars.
this calls for a high five

MtlAngelus
20 Aug 2008, 04:23
this calls for a high five
*high fives*

TeDdywoRm
20 Aug 2008, 05:21
I'm gonna review u nad ur... stuff.
UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY UR GAY.
There you go. That'll be FIVE thousand dollars.
Best review evar!:D
:p

Shadowmoon
20 Aug 2008, 10:38
LIKE HOLY FLIP-OUT, geez you people its just art, and besides! that gangsta thing wasn't my "Big" idea, i just made that gansta thing, as a random shoot-out test, my BIG ideas are the ones where the dudes talk! :p
And this is a fanart forum.;)

robowurmz
20 Aug 2008, 12:55
"just art"...
You make me vomit, you really do.

Kelster23
20 Aug 2008, 18:09
I cannot say anything has I have not watched.
Though from all the reviews it doesn't sound like I want to.

Traxada
20 Aug 2008, 23:09
LIKE HOLY FLIP-OUT, geez you people its just art, and besides! that gangsta thing wasn't my "Big" idea, i just made that gansta thing, as a random shoot-out test, my BIG ideas are the ones where the dudes talk! :p
Just to make sure you understand whats being said to you, because I think you're having bit of trouble.
You cannot draw for the life of you. Nor can you animate for the life of you. You have no visible or evident talent. You are a failure.

tal05
20 Aug 2008, 23:17
Just to make sure you understand whats being said to you, because I think you're having bit of trouble.
You cannot draw for the life of you. Nor can you animate for the life of you. You have no visible or evident talent. You are a failure.
The truth hurts...
but you know what they say ... practice makes perfect
ALOT of practice

shadowman
20 Aug 2008, 23:38
Just to make sure you understand whats being said to you, because I think you're having bit of trouble.
You cannot draw for the life of you. Nor can you animate for the life of you. You have no visible or evident talent. You are a failure.
Wow, you've changed significantly. That's okay though, because you still rulez.
@ luke
Those worms you drew look like cigars with buck teeth.

Akuryou13
21 Aug 2008, 01:12
Wow, you've changed significantly. you've not actually read any of his old posts, have you? :p

shadowman
21 Aug 2008, 11:49
I s'pose my memory just wasn't serving at the time. :p

FutureWorm
21 Aug 2008, 13:21
i just realized that agent luke titled his own thread "welcome back agent luke"
that seems a bit presumptuous, really

Pyramid
21 Aug 2008, 17:01
i just realized that agent luke titled his own thread "welcome back agent luke"
that seems a bit presumptuous, really
I figured that he used a stupid title and then some mod changed...

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