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Slick
21 Feb 2006, 20:26
Well I'll be keeping you blokes up to date on my project im working on and just some other things I have done that noone but I, knows about. But really I just want honest comments. If what I post sucks, tell me so. Don't hold back. :p
The fanart forum is full of, well you know. Ther comments "lolz can I be in teh picktur u all reedy drew?" is just down right annoying.
So I don't really have anything at the moment, I do have this (http://www.deviantart.com/view/29393257/), so let this be the begining of things to come.:)

Pigbuster
21 Feb 2006, 22:11
You're crazy good at landscaping. Pretty nice pic.
It's not easy to come up with C+C. All I got is that the worm's tears look a bit odd (They're coming out of the eyelid, rather than the eye.) and the jagged bit of cliff on the left looks weird. Also, I'm not very sure where the light source is coming from. The worm standing on the cliff on the left has shading on top his head, which makes everything all woody-doo. And the left cliff's shadow is pointing in a different direction from the cry worm's shadow.
And IMHO, the eyebrows are a little high.

Slick
21 Feb 2006, 22:14
lol...
*gets ripped to shreads* :p
Thanks. :)

Pigbuster
21 Feb 2006, 22:51
If you get enough "OMG YO GOD!!LOL" posts, I'll post this crit on your other thread, too.
Shake the Slick Cultists up a bit. :p

FutureWorm
21 Feb 2006, 23:21
Sharp idea, that.

Slick
22 Feb 2006, 02:41
If you get enough "OMG YO GOD!!LOL" posts, I'll post this crit on your other thread, too.
Shake the Slick Cultists up a bit. :p
No need. No one really seems to like it anyways.:(

SupSuper
22 Feb 2006, 13:32
I like it, it's pretty nice :)
Only criticism would be how "messily" it seems you shaded the bottom half of the grass. Oh, and lol at the POOT :p

Slick
24 Feb 2006, 05:26
Possible Scene? (http://img54.imageshack.us/my.php?image=tease5cy.swf)
Perhaps. I might accually do somthing completely diffrent from what I started...so who knows.

Pigbuster
24 Feb 2006, 05:49
The swords' handles seem a little big, and seeing as the swords give off their own light, they shouldn't be affected by shadows and should be a lot brighter.
And I think that the dust clouds would look a lot better without the sloppy big 'M's written on it to give it "texture". At least draw the lines with a smaller brush.
Everything else is quite good.

Xinos
24 Feb 2006, 06:28
Hey, that's very nicely done. I usually ignore worm art, but this was quite nice. You got the right amount of things going on in your picture, some worm fanartist tend to put waaaaaaaaay to much stuff in their battle pictures.
So, good work =)

Error404
24 Feb 2006, 17:53
I'm with pb about the light... i also think the swords are looking a bit too much like torches... maybe you should make them a little "harder"...

Slick
24 Feb 2006, 19:47
That was a proto type scene...not an accuall one that I would use.:p
But then again I never said anything like that to let you know... so my bad.

Pigbuster
24 Feb 2006, 21:42
Even if it is a prototype, it's good to get C&C on it.
Helps you make the real stuff better.

Slick
28 Feb 2006, 07:08
True.
Anyways...yay for insomnia and old Zero72 comics.:p
Bigger version. (http://www.deviantart.com/view/29692716/)
wewt.

SupSuper
28 Feb 2006, 17:05
Wow that sheep looks so retarded, like Splapp drew it.

Pigbuster
28 Feb 2006, 22:03
The sword-holding hand doesn't bug me as much as it used to. Goody.

Slick
10 May 2006, 06:42
http://img465.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newprojectwahahahahaha4xb.swf
Hokay, this is definatly not the accuall size of the movie in terms of height and width. But...I am somewhat satisfied with this part of a movie I am doing...only one problem. Music. Just for this scene. Any suggestions to what might fit?

MonkeyforaHead
10 May 2006, 08:03
I'd suggest starting off with something really peaceful and heavily flute-based, and then suddenly switching into some euro-techno. Lemme see if I can find a good selection of either, or if I need to hit the sack before then. :p
Edit: I've got something pretty decent assembled, but nowhere to host it since my webspace still hasn't been set back up after having had the 'net reinstalled.

Splapp
10 May 2006, 14:02
Nice flashage! About the music, I watched it while playing 'Alpha Beta Gaga' by Air. That seemed to work pretty well :p

Slick
11 Aug 2006, 21:47
Well I think I'm about done with the FanArt forum. I've tried to help them...but in the end AT was right when he said it was hopeless.
So, might as well start venting worms art here. :p

Zero72
11 Aug 2006, 23:54
Whoa, that's an interesting new twist on S-2K. Very awesome.

worMatty
12 Aug 2006, 00:05
With worms literally on the brain. Looks like a more low tech version of him. Maybe he's a prototype.

Pigbuster
12 Aug 2006, 00:06
That pic is the fat chicken.
With worms literally on the brain. Looks like a more low tech version of him. Maybe he's a prototype.
Give him a betamax slot.
And a ticker-tape machine. :p

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