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tgworm
23 Jan 2008, 17:57
Take this as a fairly low-key return to the forum. The comic didn't take long at all but, not to abuse the 'new' fan-art rules, It is my 'comeback' to the fanart side of things. Not too sure on the joke here but meh..It was a go. More will be on it's way soon and I may try some different approaches to the whole art thing. Comments will be much appreciated so feel free to judge me :D.
Comic 1
Rock, Paper, Scissors
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t50/Tgworm/RockPaperScissors.jpg

poninja
23 Jan 2008, 21:10
YOUR BACK!!!! who are you?

shadowman
23 Jan 2008, 22:08
And you hated melon's fillers.:p Only kidding.
It's alright, but I would work on using colors that won't make readers' eyes bleed.
The shape could use a bit of work as well.

tgworm
23 Jan 2008, 22:21
And you hated melon's fillers.:p Only kidding.
It's alright, but I would work on using colors that won't make readers' eyes bleed.
The shape could use a bit of work as well.
Point taken. Still, This is not a filler, and has not really taken much time or effort. It was mainly just a way of me getting back into this whole thing as aforementioned. I'm a bit rusty on both art and comedy so give me a break.:p

Kelster23
23 Jan 2008, 22:45
I am confused with the third panel!

Paul.Power
23 Jan 2008, 23:55
OH HEY YOU BEAT ME AT ROCK PAPER SCISSORS I MUST KILL YOU is not a joke. There is no consistent internal logic behind it, no wordplay or visual joke or... anything, really. It's not even a good non-sequitur.
Now what would be a joke is if he'd stabbed him with giant scissors rather than a giant knife, because it gives you "rock beats scissors... or does it?". But as it stands, it's not a joke.

Melon
24 Jan 2008, 00:17
Damn you Paul, I was going to say the same thing, but you beat me to it. Anyway, I think there is still humour in it. That 3rd panel cracks me up every time.
Also, it would have been nice if the second panel wasn't almost a cut paste of the first. You could have expressed so much in that panel.

shadowman
24 Jan 2008, 00:53
Yeah, I was gonna post something similar to that, but I thought not to.
That and I'm lazy.
And why does the worm have an Adam's apple?

farazparsa
24 Jan 2008, 04:09
Yeah, I was gonna post something similar to that, but I thought not to.
That and I'm lazy.
And why does the worm have an Adam's apple?
Is that what that is? Looks like a neck tumor to me. :-/

robowurmz
24 Jan 2008, 07:04
Maybe he likes to swallow footballs when he's angry?

tgworm
24 Jan 2008, 16:21
'Nuff said
(Except it's **** quality here)

shadowman
24 Jan 2008, 21:53
Nicer, but could still be improved.
I can't think of the right word, so I'm gonna call this post ironic.

Kelster23
25 Jan 2008, 04:20
Ahhh sounds about true. :rolleyes:

farazparsa
25 Jan 2008, 07:25
I don't see pointless humor as a BFG9000 in there...:p

tgworm
25 Jan 2008, 09:02
I don't see pointless humor as a BFG9000 in there...:p :p Probably should've added that. I knew it was missing something. BETTER art/comic coming soon! You unlucky buggers! ..ho ho ho

Plasma
25 Jan 2008, 21:49
Hmm... I can't help but notice I haven't requested yet...
*I REQUEST A PICTURE OF ME AND KELSEY!*

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