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philby4000
25 Aug 2006, 02:55
Now that I've finaly finished the first draft of my Comic script It's probably about time I made a thread about it here.
If you have no Idea what Monkeyshine is, It's a Comic (in both sences of the word) Sci-fi
epic featuring Cats.
You can find a bunch of concept art in my deviantart gallery:
http://philby4000.deviantart.com/gallery/
Specificaly (from newest to oldest)-
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/38356308/?q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/37839786/?qo=1&q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/36110785/?qo=5&q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/36110374/?qo=6&q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/31561547/?qo=9&q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/30394085/?qo=10&q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/28931488/?qo=11&q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25970689/?qo=13&q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25062073/?qo=14&q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23623855/?qo=17&q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/22051528/?qo=18&q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/18461852/?qo=19&q=by%3Aphilby4000+sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps
The comic is named 'Monkeyshine' after an ancient timetraveling pyramid spacecraft that features prominantly.
I've though about using the subtitle 'Cat to the future', but That's just a little too silly.
Previous working titles have included 'The Tenth' (which is already taken) and Harpo/Arty (which sucks).
The plot isn't something I can sum up easily in a few sentances, as it involves a lot of confusing timetravel elements, including the cat's previous (and not chronologicaly ordered) llives, and flashbacks to these past lives in the future.
I'm absolutely desparate for some constructive critism of the script, but I don't want to just post it here.
If you'd like to give it a read for me please provide an email adress I can send it to.

FutureWorm
25 Aug 2006, 03:16
futureworm@gmail.com is also my MSN address, add me.

Blinx
25 Aug 2006, 13:42
paranoid-android1@hotmail.com
I'd be willing to take a gander.

philby4000
25 Aug 2006, 21:13
Sent to both of you.
Many thanks.:)

Blinx
3 Sep 2006, 20:27
I never recieved mine.

philby4000
5 Sep 2006, 14:34
http://www.filefactory.com/file/dfb536/
There you go.
I'm through with messing about with email.:p

philby4000
3 Oct 2006, 23:11
RESERECT!
To drum up a little interest in my comic I present to you-
The Monkeyshine-Mini-Comic-That-Doesn't-Really-Make-Much-Sence-Unless-You're-Me!
Or- The spin off to my time-traveling cat comic that doesn't feature timetravel or cats.
to be honest I'm drawing this to submit to that creative writing magazine that foolishly printed my 'Harpo' comic strips. But I might as well post it here as well.
PAGE ONE.
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5601/mp1hc2.png

Pigbuster
4 Oct 2006, 01:28
They all look rather similar...
Or is that the point?

SupSuper
4 Oct 2006, 14:06
What a shocking amount of text!!! :eek:

philby4000
26 Oct 2006, 00:50
And resurect!
Test page!
http://www.deviantart.com/view/41975229/
And thread death.

Xinos
26 Oct 2006, 11:46
Sorry about this, not trying to hijack the thread or anything, but I just had to add text to that page. The plot is now something much more sorrowfull and deep.
http://s4.photobucket.com/albums/y150/darkxinos/?action=view&current=coke.png&refPage=&imgAnch=imgAnch1
But you have to pretend that the guy giving them cups, in the lowest leftest square is the same guy who orders the coke.

philby4000
26 Oct 2006, 13:51
LOL.
That's absolutely excellent.:D

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